Good first attempt however at first I found it a bit confusing as there isn't a clear storyline. I also feel that the clips are too fast pace which doesn't help in not being able to understand the storyline.
Thank you for your feedback, i will reflect on this and ensure to make it less ambiguous
Good first attempt however at first I found it a bit confusing as there isn't a clear storyline. I also feel that the clips are too fast pace which doesn't help in not being able to understand the storyline.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback, i will reflect on this and ensure to make it less ambiguous
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